Rewording, sentence building and the use of comment balloons for feedback Below is a student example based on the Stage 5 History topic Gallipoli and information obtained from the Australian War Memorial site ‘Encyclop

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• Dardanelles
• Gallipoli
• Çanakkale
• Yes and no
• Word
• While
• Battle of Lone Pine
• Linguistics
• English words
• Gallipoli Campaign

National Tertiary Education Union (NTEU) Higher Education Standards Panel Call for Comment No. 3 Proposed Higher Education Standards Framework (the Framework) Atten: Higher Education Standards Panel Executive

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• Education
• National Tertiary Education Union
• Quality assurance
• Technical and further education

BEVIN NDOVIvPOST NEWSPAPERS LIMITEDTIMES PRINTPAK ZAMBIA LIMITEDSUPREME COURTCHIRWA., SILOMBA, AND MWANAMWAMBWA, JJS.,10th February, 2009 and 27th August, 2010.(S.C.Z. Judgment No. 8 of] Tort - Defamation - Defen

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• Defamation
• Abuse
• Crimes
• Fair comment
• Appeal
• Law
• Ethics
• Tort law

A school’s guide to dealing with the media Reporters have a job to do and it’s important to understand that, while also knowing exactly what your rights and responsibilities are. Your initial response to the media is

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• Observation
• Clichés
• No comment
• Knowledge

  Pharmaceutical Supply Chain Initiative (PSCI) Audit Report for Pharmaceutical Industry Suppliers Participation in a PSCI audit does not preclude separate auditing of the supplier by an individual PSCI member company

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• Source code
• Computing
• Yes and no
• Yes
• Comment
• Metadata
• Reference

UK – NORWAY. TRANS-BOUNDARY OIL & GAS FIELDS GUIDELINES FOR DEVELOPMENT OF TRANS-BOUNDARY OIL AND GAS FIELDS Version 1 (for comment), 26 February 2010 PREFACE These guidelines for development of trans-boundary oil and

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• United Kingdom Continental Shelf
• Norway
• Environmental impact assessment
• Europe
• Earth
• Geology of the United Kingdom

COMMENT/ANALYSIS However, with no real global regulation of A shameful record the industry change will be hard to achieve.

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• Basel Convention
• Environment
• Sustainability
• Basel
• Geography of Europe
• Recycling by product
• Ship breaking
• Ship disposal

DISCOVER‐AQ Daily Observational Status  Date:  7 July 2011  Status definitions:    Green = Full Capability (no comment required)  Yellow = Partial Capability (comment on specific instruments 

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• AERONET
• No comment
• 55 Pandora
• Planetary science
• Baltimore–Washington metropolitan area
• Beltsville
• Maryland

DISCOVER‐AQ Daily Observational Status  Date:  5 July 2011  Status definitions:    Green = Full Capability (no comment required)  Yellow = Partial Capability (comment on specific instruments 

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• Baltimore–Washington metropolitan area
• Beltsville
• Maryland

Name of respondent / 回應者名稱: Marc Q1: No / 不支持 Q1 Comment / 意見: The Gov. invests an enormous sum of money in the Exchange Fund, and returns are usually very good. I believe MPF contributions should be

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